I am 21 so my opinion on your music is relevant I guess. I also guess you want for me totally honest so that is what I will be.
I think you have some very real talent. I like your style very much. I love the melody. What I dont like so much is the way I hear your voice. It is like you are singing in a cave or something. I cant really put my finger on it. I dont know if that is intentional or if it is a microphone issue but I would like for your voice to be more crisp. Just my opinion. Overall a very good song. I actually listened to it more than once and in the end I just decided to download it and save my browser some trouble.
Good luck with your dreams. You should hold on to them.
Matic
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