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  • #87497
    Anonymous
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    “Give me my Romeo; and, when I shall die,

    Take him and cut him out in little stars,

    And he will make the face of heaven so fine

    That all the world will be in love with night…”

    Isn’t that beautiful?

    #87559
    Anonymous
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    What is your favorite love poem, one you read, one you wrote? It doesn’t need to be fancy, probably better if it is not as glittery as Romeo and Juliet (didn’t end well), You can also write sarcastic love poem like. I may…
    anita

    #87591
    Anonymous
    Guest

    It was many and many a year ago,
    In a kingdom by the sea,
    That a maiden there lived whom you may know
    By the name of ANNABEL LEE;
    And this maiden she lived with no other thought
    Than to love and be loved by me.

    I was a child and she was a child,
    In this kingdom by the sea;
    But we loved with a love that was more than love-
    I and my Annabel Lee;
    With a love that the winged seraphs of heaven
    Coveted her and me.

    And this was the reason that, long ago,
    In this kingdom by the sea,
    A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
    My beautiful Annabel Lee;
    So that her highborn kinsman came
    And bore her away from me,
    To shut her up in a sepulchre
    In this kingdom by the sea.

    The angels, not half so happy in heaven,
    Went envying her and me-
    Yes! – that was the reason (as all men know,
    In this kingdom by the sea)
    That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
    Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.

    But our love it was stronger by far than the love
    Of those who were older than we-
    Of many far wiser than we-
    And neither the angels in heaven above,
    Nor the demons down under the sea,
    Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
    Of the beautiful Annabel Lee.

    For the moon never beams without bringing me dreams
    Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
    And the stars never rise but I feel the bright eyes
    Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
    And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
    Of my darling- my darling- my life and my bride,
    In the sepulchre there by the sea,
    In her tomb by the sounding sea.

    #87597
    Anonymous
    Guest

    Pick up your soul
    There it is crushed in the soil
    Splattered, spilled like blood on sand

    There is your heart
    Broken like an old harp left behind
    Who plays the harp anymore?

    Look at your face in the mirror
    Youth has passed, wrinkles on forehead
    The blue in the eyes is gone, now only grey

    Pick up your soul
    Who left it in the mud?

    If this is love, where is the love?

    The you in you has been misplaced, not dead

    Pick up your soul, pick up your heart, put the life back into your face-
    Fight, fight for you.

    #87703
    Anonymous
    Guest

    Love-
    From the moment I saw you, I knew…
    No, this is not right
    I looked into your eyes and my heart…
    Not right.
    Hold my hand, take me to the sunset
    Bad…

    Anyone\

    #87707
    jock
    Participant

    some good poems there anita

    Luv is a brand name of a dog food in Australia
    Love occurs when you get distracted by life
    Love is not lust but the two often get confused
    Love is not only emotion but it can be a hint of the real thing

    I love my dog
    Now what does that mean?
    It means I would cry if he died
    His existence gives me a feeling of warmth,
    relaxation and presence
    I love my partner
    Nowe what does that mean?
    It means I would cry if she died
    Her existence gives me a reason to live

    #87708
    Anonymous
    Guest

    Dear Jack:

    I thought I was going to be the only one posting on my thread. Thank you for honoring my thread. I just wrote to you on Saiisha’s thread and thought it may be disruptive there. Here is what I wrote there:

    “Dear Jack:

    Sometimes trees fall on the private and county roads and people are stuck here, and often during high wind the power is out, for hours or longer. The other day a tree fell as I walked by, almost hit me. Before moving here, I thought A Tree falling in a forest was a philosophical scenario (does it make a sound if no one hears it, the tree, when it falls)- I didn’t know trees actually fall in the forest and better watch out.

    Anyway, Jack, if you would like to visit… “Jack Visits the Country”, that would be the story. Or “Jack meet Elk”. I can see a book of short stories I will write upon such a visit. How about “Jack in the Forest”. And an epilogue:” If-a Tree falls in a forest and Jack heard it, did it really fall?”

    Back to the love poems, the third one, i wrote, by the way. i am quite impressed with myself and I am not fishing for compliments for it. I just complimented myself: quite creative, anita, way to go\!

    Oh, what a lovely love poem you wrote, Jack, not as witty and rhyming as the others but sweet. Child like, not childish, revealing to me the innocent, lovable jack. “It mean I would cry if he/she died.” These are the words of the inner child Jack, is my feel of it.

    By the way, I drank plenty of coffee and I am in big trouble regarding possibilities of sleeping tonight…I am quite fidgety.

    anita

    #87738
    jock
    Participant

    Pick up your soul
    There it is crushed in the soil
    Splattered, spilled like blood on sand

    There is your heart
    Broken like an old harp left behind
    Who plays the harp anymore?

    Look at your face in the mirror
    Youth has passed, wrinkles on forehead
    The blue in the eyes is gone, now only grey

    Pick up your soul
    Who left it in the mud?

    If this is love, where is the love?

    The you in you has been misplaced, not dead

    Pick up your soul, pick up your heart, put the life back into your face-
    Fight, fight for you.

    Anita, can you talk about the meaning of this poem?
    I don’t quite understand it, ashamed to say.

    #87743
    jock
    Participant

    Sometimes trees fall on the private and county roads and people are stuck here, and often during high wind the power is out, for hours or longer. The other day a tree fell as I walked by, almost hit me. Before moving here, I thought A Tree falling in a forest was a philosophical scenario (does it make a sound if no one hears it, the tree, when it falls)- I didn’t know trees actually fall in the forest and better watch out.

    Anyway, Jack, if you would like to visit… “Jack Visits the Country”, that would be the story. Or “Jack meet Elk”. I can see a book of short stories I will write upon such a visit. How about “Jack in the Forest”. And an epilogue:” If-a Tree falls in a forest and Jack heard it, did it really fall?”

    wow, such a wild and primitive landscape. I won’t be going anywhere unfortunately for quite a while, until a steady income starts trickling in again.
    can you survive OK financially? Have to kill an elk to eat when hungry? 🙂

    #87757
    Anonymous
    Guest

    Dear Jack:

    I see survival as one day at a time thing. I don’t think I take tomorrow for granted. I don’t need much in way of material things. If EVER you and your partner did travel, IF, someday, it would be nice if you came to visit. What a delightful image it is in my mind, makes me smile.

    Regarding the poem, it says FIGHT FOR YOU. so it means, you the reader, aka Jack: fight for Jack, like in the workplace scenario we practiced the other day, assert, do not submit. “You in you has been misplaced” means the valuable inner child Jack, the lovable, loving Jack is there all the time and is worth fighting for! When you are not aware of your worth, your lovability, it is not because you are not those things, you just don’t SEE it from where you are at.

    anita

    #87807
    jock
    Participant

    Oh ok now I get it.
    Yes I like it very much Anita.

    Now another question, this “fight” theme you express. Do you think we have to “fight” for everything in life? Is “fighting” the word you want to use? Is everything a fight?
    I know I have an internal fight or struggle going on, most of the time. I think the more aware I am of what is going on, the less I need to fight.
    To be honest, I don’t want to see life as a fight? There must be a better word, a better motif for my life. I can see people use it as motivation like a Rocky movie.
    But I think a word like “acceptance” might be better for me. “look beyond the superficial”, be careful how you look at anything. Be careful of what conclusions you come to.

    #87823
    Anonymous
    Guest

    Dear Jack:

    The word FIGHT is not necessary. ASSERTING oneself is good enough. Can’t have well being without asserting yourself, standing up for yourself, demanding respectful behavior from others and not submitting to disrespect, abuse and bullying. How do you feel about substituting ASSERTING for fighting?

    anita

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