Dear Myles:

Thank you for sharing your poem!

I like many of the rhymes, they are pleasing to me mental ear, especially these: “I wish (I wish) I wasn’t always trying to be right/ …to pick a fight” and “So how did I manage/ To cause you so much damage”

In your poem, you asked:  “What did I do that made you walk away?/ There must be a reason/
That you decided on leavin”- you answered that question at least in part earlier in the poem: you were  “always trying to be right… always trying to pick a fight….(and said) so many thing I wish I didn’t say”.

I like it. Hope you write and share more.

anita