Dear Jane:

Your original post is written so well, an attention grabbing story, talented writing. It is not a story that is spontaneously told, there is an editing and re-editing to the story, I am thinking, to produce such a perfect or almost perfect product.

Two years ago, when you were fifteen, a girl, Jenna, invited you to a party. The party consisted of you, Jenna (two girls in total) and seven boys. At one point you were drunk and Jenna helped you stand up and she carried you to a bedroom where she lay you down and closed the door behind her. “Not even ten minutes went by before the door opened again” and Trevor was in.

* I wonder how you know when drunk, lying on that bed, that “not even ten minutes went by”- when drunk you looked at the clock when Jenna left the bedroom and again when Trevor arrived? (I don’t trust one’s sense of time when drunk)

In your second post you wrote that you still talk to Jenna occasionally and that she is “a very sweet girl”- did you not talk to her in the two years since about that night?

anita