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    Martina
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    Hey, could you please tell me what you honestly think about summary of this story? thank you very much

    Sophia Tamm is the ordinary girl from small country in the middle of Europe. She had always wanted to study in the United Kingdom and after taking a gap year she is finally able to realise her dreams.

    She is really excited about starting the new chapter of her life. However, the reality is a little bit different. After first few days at the university Sophia feels lost, depressed and lonely. She is trying to find a way how to make those unpleasant feelings more bearable. But instead of talking to somebody about her problems, she tries to make them disappear with help of cigarettes and alcohol.

    Everything is gonna change on one of those crazy Saturday nights. She meets a cute British boy who is able to see through her. One night, one dance, one kiss. One long walk up the hill and lots of talking. Lots of tears from Sophia because she finally decides to open herself up. She gives up fighting with her feelings and trying to be strong. For a second she lets someone else to lift up that weight from her shoulders. But they are both really drunk and their emotional connection is gonna result in something more…

    Sophia wakes up the next morning and freaks out. She has no idea what happened. The last thing she remembers is walking up the hill with that boy. She doesn’t even remember that she told him eveything about her fears and insecurities. She’s never done anything like this and can’t believe that she has became one of those girls who sleeps around. She puts on her clothes as quickly as possible and without a second glance runs away.

    When, fresh university graduate, Joshua Asford, wakes up, he finds out that the other side of bed is empty. Only evidence of this girl is her perfume still lingering in the bedsheets and the broken necklase which he finds under the pillow. He wants to find Sophia, wants to tell her that this wasn’t just one-night-stand thing. But this was his last night in town for a little while. He was just visiting some old friends and needs to get back to his home town to deal with some personal issues.

    It looks like this is the end of their story. Sophia is going on with her life, trying to get herself together, to become that person she used to be before she came to the uni. But also she is slowly starting to remember everything what happened that night. And feels bad that she‘d ran away like this.

    But life is full of suprises and those two meet again. This time they are both sober and still feel that magic pull between them. Sophia gets back her necklase and gains even more because Joshua is determined to stay with her.

     

     

    #172895

    anita
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    Dear Martina:

    Is this story Fiction, a story you are working on, as the author?

    anita

    #172931

    Martina
    Participant

    it is suposed to be description of the story… and I would like to know if it is not absolute “bullshit”

    #173031

    anita
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    Dear Martina:

    I read your description and I like it  very much. There is nothing about it that I dislike, nothing that reads like non-reality to me. It is definitely inviting to read the story. Well done, if I may say so!

    anita

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