thanks a lot anita;) i agree that i should reject the inner bully and with each rejection, the inner bully seems to be less active:) thanks for your editing, it helped a lot. i also talked to the ap biology teacher and he said that fermentation doesn’t create atp, but is used to convert the pyruvate of glycolysis to something less toxic. he also said photosynthesis doesn’t generate as much atp as cellular respiration, it is important to include it in the atp process and compare the two. i made some of my own edits as well and i also added photosynthesis into the mix. for cellular respiration, the molecules used can be carbohydrates, proteins or fats from food to be broken down to glucose, the simplest sugar. while in photosynthesis, plants use sunlight to convert energy to sugars like glucose. i took you edits into consideration, i wish this website would be good with formats and images because my work is more of an outline and the outline is hard to place on this website. thanks a lot for your help:D if you don’t mind, can you give me your email so i could send the revised edition in outline format? i feel confident that i managed to hit most of the points and i am grateful for your help:D thank you for saying that i am also quite clear in my explanation of complex details:) my inner bully doesn’t think that so i must ignore him whenever he says that i am bad at synthesizing sources.