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  • September 3, 2017 at 7:09 am #166750
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    Dear Myles:

    Thank you for sharing another song. It rhymes so well, I can hear the rhythm in my mind’s ear as I read it. It has a very nice flow to it. It doesn’t have too much rhyming, a good balance, in my evaluation, between rhyming and rhythm. Here is one part where it “sounds” so good to me:

    “If you left my sight, just know that I would surely die
    You’re so incomparable, this is something that I can’t deny
    What I have for you is so deep, so real, so honest, so true
    If you feel the same way, why don’t you give me some clues.

    Good Love Song. Interesting, you wrote that you “finally wrote something happy”, and that something happy includes “If you left my sight… I would surely die”- such emotional dependency, if literally true, will make happiness, well… very short lived.

    anita

    September 3, 2017 at 10:34 am #166784
    Myles
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    I understand where you’re coming from Anita, I think that when you’re smitten with someone, you would say something like that though, and then you realise that’s not how love “works.” It’s something you work on. And I guess because I was thinking of Amerie when I wrote this, who has a very passionate delivery, I kind of thought she would say something like this. The song was still about something I went through though.

    September 4, 2017 at 6:43 am #166842
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    Dear Myles:

    I understand. It is a passionate delivery and passionate love songs have this life-or-death wording. Art, as in poems and songs, is about expressing one’s emotions in words any which way, however it feels like, uninhibited. (It is my personal passion, I suppose, to analyze further, as I did in my last post to you).

    Looking forward to more songs and posts from you.

    anita

    September 4, 2017 at 9:20 am #166870
    Myles
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    Thank you Anita. Another reason why some of the lyrics are so passionate is because there was probably a part of me that understood that this guy would never feel the same way about me as I did him, and that was hard to accept, thus the almost “pleading” way it might come across.

    September 4, 2017 at 11:06 am #166888
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    Dear Myles:

    Having an incompatible sexual orientation will make it impossible, a relationship, that is, although in certain circumstances, straight men do have physically intimate relationships with other men. I also noticed that emotional connections between two straight men who are not physically involved and have no such plans can be very strong nonetheless.

    anita

    September 5, 2017 at 6:35 am #166978
    Myles
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    I guess they’d be called Men Who Have Sex With Men at that point. The problem is, that when you aren’t honest about who you are, you end up hurting people (I’m talking about guys who say they are curious when they know they’re attracted to women or people who just want to “experiment.” I just feel like a stable relationship is off the table if you aren’t sure of yourself.)

    September 5, 2017 at 9:29 am #167010
    Anonymous
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    Dear Myles:

    I agree: “when you aren’t honest about who you are, you end up hurting people”- very much so. It is so important.

    anita

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