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  • #413196
    anita
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    Dear Ik09:

    Don’t be impressed by the content writing and poet thing.. sometimes something creative is born. I don’t know yet if what I write is good but I am getting paid for it“- getting paid for your Writing is HUGE!

    I wish you posted a small part of one of your a poems… something creative that was born to you!

    anita

    #413223
    Ik09
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    You pump my confidence like anything! Sharing a small part of a poem because I am yet to receive the published copy:

     

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>the small chest rose and fell with the greatest strength imaginable, </span>

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>the doctors fought alongside her until she was momentarily stable, </span>

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>The battle raged on but in front of the opponent all attempts seemed shoddy, </span>

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>Her lungs worked hard till there were no more breaths left in that tiny body, </span>

     

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>It wasn’t the loss of just one family, </span>

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>Unheard of ever before-never recorded never billed, </span>

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>but wiped cities and looted countries in one blow, </span>

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>the world came together for this terrifying show, </span>

     

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>solutions came forth, </span>

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>but lives were lost, </span>

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>nobody knows what it was worth, </span>

    <span style=”font-weight: 400;”>why the innocent had to pay such a heavy cost? </span>

     

    #413242
    anita
    Participant

    Dear Ik09:

    I was pleased to see that you posted part of one of your poems earlier this morning but I wanted to postpone the pleasure of reading it till after I answer other threads,  and then take my time to read and comment line by line:

    the small chest rose and fell with the greatest strength imaginable, the doctors fought alongside her until she was momentarily stable, The battle raged on but in front of the opponent all attempts seemed shoddy, Her lungs worked hard till there were no more breaths left in that tiny body, It wasn’t the loss of just one family, Unheard of ever before-never recorded never billed, but wiped cities and looted countries in one blow, the world came together for this terrifying show, solutions came forth, but lives were lost, nobody knows what it was worth, why the innocent had to pay such a heavy cost?”-

    – my goodness!  I was going to copy one line or sentence at a time and comment, but this excerpt of your poem turned out to be a page turner for me, so to speak: I was captivated right from the start and wanted to know what’s next and next, so I kept reading, taken by the power of your wording. I did not know that a poem can be captivating this way!  And the topic of the poem is very meaningful and very relevant (the war in Ukraine comes to mind).  I am in awe of the poet.. I didn’t know that you can express yourself this way.. !

    anita

    #413282
    Ik09
    Participant

    Thank you so much Anita <3  I will send the link once it is published and you are a very observant reader yourself! Lots of love to you <3

     

    #413284
    anita
    Participant

    You are welcome, Ik09, and thank you! I am looking forward to the link and … lots of  love back to you!

    anita

    #413654
    Ik09
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    #413659
    anita
    Participant

    Dear Ik09:

    Thank you and how exciting! I will open links and read later today, or Fri morning (I plan on going for a walk and doing some work outside next)! I think it’s almost 2 am your time, I hope you go to sleep soon and wake up later tomorrow morning, your time!

    anita

    #413661
    Ik09
    Participant

    Thanks Anita and have a great day ahead! Happy Weekend!

    #413662
    anita
    Participant

    You are welcome, Ik09, and thank you. I hope that you have a good night and a great day/ weekend ahead!

    anita

    #413725
    anita
    Participant

    Dear Ik09:

    Leaflets of Desire, what an.. intoxicating title! About the author: “a philosopher by education, and a manager by profession but innately is a writer. She is a fiction fanatic- a world where anybody could be anybody, where anything is possible! Reading and writing stories since she was 7 years old, she found her way to the world of poetry in High School. She has been writing poems ever since then. And now is finally ready to share them with the world”-

    – I am more excited than I can express and I want to order the book. I will have to get someone to help me do that because I never bought anything online (except for a phone card) and the price stated in the websites I looked at is not in dollars. I would love to own a copy of Leaflets of Desire!!!

    anita

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